Cute i liked it, i thought i was really ramdon!

I like how you word things. great poem (:

I like this poem, great wording!

I thought this one was really nicely written.
The words seemed almost delicate and fragile and the repetition really gets the points across.
Well done =)
5/5
*gem*

This was a good poem very colorful lol

Haha! A lovely touch to the end. Great poem! The ryhming was good and thankfully, people still write happy poems :D. Keep it up!

Hatori

I Like This A Lot You're Good To Be So Young

...I would be white so no one would use me or break me =)

Excellent poem 5/5 thanks for your comment on "The Void"

That was actually a really cute poem.
There were two errors that I saw.
That happens because of the site.
This one showed a lot of flow, lovely.