Omg, super cute, i really loved the meaning behind the poem, that you shouldn't lie to someone you love, great job

---luv always tara

Omg!!! i loved the way it turned out, how she said the same exact thing to the guy, that he said to her- great message... 5/5 from me, and would you mind commenting my 2 new poems, "confused heart", and "sweetest kisses".. thanksss!!

Very true. but to question a guys love if he does say it. hurts as well. so the way i see it. theres two options. 1~ take the chance. and put ur heart on the line..risking probably many months hurting. or 2~ don't tell him stay safe, but always have that thought in ur head. and than eventually looking back and saying what if.

very good poem
c/b

Thanks for the comments... and do you have an AIM screename?... well yeah... so to give you an update on me and shane (my bf).. well weve beengoing out since 3.14.07, and we actually broke up.. bc he said he "didn't trust me" or w.e bc one of my guy friends hugged me... or w.e, so i said lets just take a break so you can learn to trust me, but when he came over the next day to see my bro, he ended up asking me out again, and saying that he missed me, and he trusts me, and all this stuff haha... but yeah comment back!!

Omg this is so cute.. you are a very good writer.. keep it up

That is cute, and yea I know we have similarites. Anyways great job.

Hey kelsey nice poem thanx 4 the commet i actually gave up on that guy and now im bumming over another omfg love sux
always megan!

This was a good poem It was sooo cute lol!

That was a good poem.I really liked it. Keep up the good work.

Kelsie

I love it. love, love, love it. especially the last stanza.... 5/5 girly.

much love,
mac.<3