Well done on this. you seem to be able to write many poems. and no two close to being the same. well wat i have read.

5/5 David

In the beginning this poem reminded me of "face down" by the jumpsuit apparatus. was it your inspiration in any way love? some of the rhyming schemes seemed really forced but overall great write love. 4/5.

Crys
^Cries
Well, I'm not a fan of internet slang. No offence you shouldn't be on here if you can't spell, or write correctly. I thought the poem was good, like I said you need to work on a couple of things. God Bless 4/5
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