That poem is delicious.
Deliciously dark, and yeah...no crits...I liked it.

Beautiful like a lake of black tears shining softly in the moonlight with a girl ( or guy) just standing on a lump of cold black rock praying that it would end quickly she starts to slice and dies and now the black waters a red in memory of her/him the lake would be the only one to miss her/him cause she was all alone and is now dead

Thank you sweets.
I love this poem. Written very nicely!

Greatly written poem. Wording is excellent and atmosphere is superb. I like the topic very much and the way you wrote this poem is incredible.
5/5