Comments : One Fateful Day

  • 18 years ago

    by kiara

    This poem is so sad i luved everything about it the emotion and the flow was brilliant

    Forever having lost myself.
    Wishing to just die.

    i cant get them 2 lines out of my head well done
    5/5
    <3 kiara

  • 18 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Very strong poem. Very sad too. I gave it a 5 all around. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!!

  • 18 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Very strong poem. Very sad too. I gave it a 5 all around. Keep writing and I'll keep reading!!