Great job on your poem....very deep thoughts.

The time clock spins
Another death is not prevailed
The land grows with mens sins
Has perfection really failed?

This stanza stood out to me.
Take care Cindy

A very good message. The flow was well done except the last line, but overall a good poem.

"The time clock spins
Another death is not prevailed
The land grows with mens sins
Has perfection really failed?"

Loved these lines.

Always,
Jeannie

A beautifull poem :) and so colorfull :)
made me think if my lastnights dream lol
love it 99/5