So sad... The imagery was beautiful and heartbreaking.

"And I pretend I am weightless
In this cruel and burdened world"
^^^ Beautiful wording! I have felt this a time or two... Very well written poem!

Sarah! This poem was amazing. I didn't even realize it didn't rhyme till I read it over. Lol. I love how you worded this. The flow was superb and it all just fit perfectly together. I love it so much. Simply amazing. 5/5. Take care, love ya!

` Liz =]

Beautiful. That's all I can say.