Great poem the only part I saw that should be changed was this

"Why I can't I forget"

The first I needs to come out it doesnt sound right :p. Other then that it was very nicely worded. I actually had to look up a word I didnt know what it meant but now I do. Ah expanding vocabulary :)

Wonderful poem indeed!

Again, you've got lovely vocabulary. This was wonderful, and very powerful, not to mention absolutely well worded.
You never cease to amaze me with your words.

Once again, the vocab usage is amazing, as is the flow of this poem. It's so sad, yet once again I'm wanting more and more.

5/5.

Unbelievable, they just get better and better; I didn't think that was even possible! Haha, this was amazing. The imagery was outstanding and your wording was great. Keep it up, Darling.

"And the colours combined
As two became one,
And I said I didn't mind
Being your someone to lean on."

^^ I LOVED that stanza. =]

5.5
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