Very nice! i love the story, it's sooo cute!!!

5/5

~~rikki, aka SSS~~

Gem
This is so sweet. Your loving caring nature really shows in this poem.

Ever since you kissed me
I was straight head over heels
Cause on that December bus ride
My love for you was sealed

Love can be so wonderful.
Take care love Cindy

Hhhmm!! i have traveled in bus for 18 years and only been pushed by people around me....you are a very lucky person indeed... :o))

loved the poem dear and once again you make me jealous... :o))

keep writing

all the best and take care

Such sweet romantic poem , really warms the heart.Great job.

Take care
chavii.

I need to know the name of that bus Gem .... lol
... seriously!

Beautifully penned from the heart that beats with words of love.
Wonderful read dear Gem
Take care
Luanne

Aww that was so cute and beautiful. beautifully worded. great job with this one i really liked it. it was sweet =) is it bout marcus?? anyway keep it up xx

Awww thats so sweet and lovely. i like the story and for it to be an oldie its still good. i like the last verse of the poem :

Ever since you kissed me
I was straight head over heels
Cause on that December bus ride
My love for you was sealed.

i love that part is so sweet and nice. it had good rhyming. great job 5/5
p.s Is this for marcus when yall were younger?

This was so sweet!
A great opener and each stanza was better than the last.
The flow was beautiful and the imagery used was pretty.
I haven't commented your poems in a long time, it's defintely time for me to start doing so again.
I love it!