Comments : Earth Drums

  • 16 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Very well done Ang. I could picture the clouds moving in and everything. I like this piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jason

    Good job on this one chica. The entire flow with the drums was excellent.

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    HOLY MOLY!!! I'm not into many nature poems...I love nature but reading about doesn't always float my boat but you thrown down on some nature pieces!!! You and Sunny both capture the TRUE beauty of it portray it in a way where the reader is left begging for me!!!! This what poetry is all about!!! You have something I didn't know you had girl!!!! HAHAHA I've been away far too long!!!! This is beautiful!!!!! From beginning to end and even after you captured my heart!!!!!! Awesome write!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    HAHAHAHAHA I meant "begging for MORE" I'm so sorry...

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is beautiful!

    "off in the distance
    is softly heard
    mother nature beating
    upon the earth"
    ^^^I love this stanza! And the last stanza is pretty fantastic, too. Very nice piece!