This piece of work made me understand him more, too. I liked this, not only because it was a tribute for Kyo, but also because it has made an impression on me, that which made me realize that it's wrong to misjudge other people because of certain "trifling" reasons, rather, one should lend a helping a hand for them. To digress a bit, I'm always curious of how Fruits Basket ended. Have you seen it? Hmm... how I wish I can watch it soon.

Anyway,

"I kept seeing your face,
As bright as the early sun.
My life became less violent,
You made it seem like fun."
^ I love that stanza; so warm... so beautiful...

Keep on writing what you feel and like. all the best and take care. kudos'
Debbie

I loved this piece so much, Yuna! I felt every emotion of Kyo and this poem made me think even more about his troubles. It`s even better because I understand what you talk about in it! The flow was very well done and your choice of words complemented your own unique style of writing. Keep it up, and congratulations on the first place!

Hatori

I read this wondering who Kyo was and was puzzled throughout. I have since read a synopsis of that particular Manga story and understand somewhat more now. Kudos to you SuperStar :)

"I kept seeing your face,
As bright as the early sun.
My life became less violent,
You made it seem like fun."
Lovely work Yuna...very beautifully portrayed tribute for Kyo!!.......loved it!...kp up the good work!
xxPoojaxx

KYO-KUUUUUN! *tackle glomp*

That was a beautiful poem, Yuna! It made me cry. It's amazing, I've never seen a fanpoem for a manga before!^^ You should write one for Yuki as well.

5/5 Great job, and thanx again for the comment. Natsuki Takaya would be very happy if she saw your poem. Rock on.

Fruit basket rocks...this poems is very deep as goes intel and preserverince...ALL ANIME,MANGA,ECT. ROCKS ^_^

YEAH!!!!! LOVE KYO!!!! LOVE fruits Basket!!! A Friend of mine has the whole series on DVD! Nice Concept by the way. and well written. ja ne!

Woooooww!! amazing!! great job!!

Keep it up 5/5