I loved your flow, excellent. But the ending was not satisfying enough, but this was an excellent write, good job.

PS. plz comment and rate on my poems.

This was really good, loved it. Lol, it'l stay this time dont worry about that - you two are matched for each other.
5/5
-Black night-

LMAO!!!!! The penny finally drops! She opens her eyes for a split second and the light shines out bright.
I was on you 'thankyou list' and you never read any of my poems or figured out who I am?
and what d ya mean everyone else knows? whos everyone?
well here I am, my emotions are yours to see.
wish you all the best with craig
-Black night-