Wow...I love the way you start of the poem talking about a boy. But somehow in a really cool way you twist your words, and end up revealing the boy as you. And how one poem with only a few stanza's can narrate an event that happend through 13 years. Wow! I like this poem! 5/5^^!

Really touching...sad, but beautiful...

*isabel*

Great poem!!!-VALERIE 5/5

Hey darl great poem. very powerful. lot of emotion. touching write. xx

Woah... strong...

It made me want to cry. The wording and emotions were perfect. Along with the flow and rhyme scheme. You did a wonderful job with this poem.

keep it up, hun.
<3Teria.