Comments : The Unseen

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can relate to this poem, it's simply but excellently written.
    "Just to ease my inner commotion for a while.
    I can trick myself into normality..." - great lines.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, this poem is amazing. You described your emotions perfectly. Wording is superb, I loved it.
    Deep, excellent poem with outstanding atmosphere like this one really deserves 5/5.