Comments : Perfectly Romantic [[Except She Was Alone]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Elizabetta

    I love how this poem tells a story, i can relate too. I especially love the ending -

    Sadly she sighed,
    And wished it were true,
    Unfortunatly she remembered,
    She was dreaming about you.

    I like how it rhymes. Great job - 5/5

    ~Lizzie~