I can totally relate to your poem i love it 5/5

I love her so much
I'm going crazy
The sun is bright
But still looks hazy

This is my favorite verse. I can relate to every word you have written and left reflecting upon my own heartache left wanting again to cry.

Nice poem very well written.

--Sherr

Oh. i lvoed the start the most. it was excellent to see how smoothly it all was. the ending was very dramatic.

awesome once again. 5/5 David

She is the color
She is the light
She has the power
To make it alright

So beautiful lines~~~

I sink deeper into madness
I sink deeper into hell
Is my heart still beating?
Because I can't tell

Nicely written...can really relate to this verse...sometimes love is pain...pure and simple...keep writing...