Awesome job very mysterious and awesome good job

keenan

Hrm, this is rather good. I like how you got the idea to write this poem. Very creative indeed if I do say so myself. The flow and rhyme pattern was good, I liked your word usage made a lot of sense you did really good on writing this poem.

I really enjoy your word use, the idea is extremely unique, that pulled me in. I like that you could take the idea of a tattered book and make it so visible and enticing to the reader.

Genius

Fascinating.
This peice was very enjoyable.
The flow was beautiful and the ryhmes Flawless.
You really capture the mystery.
Keep it up.
Elaine.5/5

Excellent poem...i love the word choice and the rhyming was perfect....

"Tangled in the words so soft,
lightly whispered passion.
touched in the ink-filled thoughts,
with a love-made fashion."

this is my favorite stanza.

great job!5/5

Wow! You're only 14? This was really good. I loved the lines "lightly whispered passion...
touched in the ink-filled thoughts..."

Your words are really strong and I loved the way you used them. Nice job.