Rachel
This poem sings with your love. The flow and imagery are excellent :)

You are the rock of strength,
when the path's hard to tread.
You are the twinkle of galaxies,
traveling afar.
Dancing through heaven ,
as I wish on a star.
You are.........................

This part was my favorite.
Love you
Aunt Cindy

Oh i loved the ending the most. it was so strong and meaningful. excellent once again.

5/5 David

Could feel the passion flowing through every word...loved the way you wrote this one

keep writing

all the best and take care

I don't think it could get much better. outstanding. 5/5 all day long. keep up the excellent work.

Beautiful poem! I love it! It's very well written! 5/5 :0)
*Just Lisa*

Hey i really love the way this poem was structured. beautifully written, great use of words. thank u so much for ur comment on my poem. meant alot. xx

This was an excellent and beautifully written poem.
I loved it.

Those we love are all these and so much more. Beautifully expressed and warmly felt.

--Sher

Those we love are all these and so much more. Beautifully expressed and warmly felt.

--Sher

Very well written...Absolutely beautiful!!

How I wish I could write this beautifully. You have done an amazing job of capturing the essence of love. What a wonderful thing. Simply elegant.
Dixie

Love this poem Rachel....so beautifully written and romantic...

You are the twinkle of galaxies,
traveling afar.
Dancing through heaven ,
as I wish on a star.
You are.........................

I love these lines.....5/5

Awhh this is really sweet. i can definetly see why people rate it so high because it is a wonderful poem. it definetly gets a 5/5 from me!

Rachel... I just want you to know I have come back to this one several times and each reading I find more and more to love about it. You paint a wonderful picture of your feelings,, thank you darlin for sharing it with us.

Very good love poem, I might use that for my girl, nice job.

I liked this poem as well. but i think you should have put another you are in it befor you typed teh last you are. it feel like it still needed a line or two. but still wonderfully written great flow as well