I loved this. can i ask tho? are you religeous? i loved this poem. confide in him and he shall prevail.

5/5 David

Hmmmmmm i wouldnt say its bad but i know you can do better. 4/5

Sherry
This is a wonderful poem. Turn to him in times of despair and need. He answers prayers. I know you will all be together again. Sometimes are best poems come straight from our hearts. I know this is written from the heart of a mother.

On our knees nightly
Praying to GOD above
Believing with our hearts
Our family will soon be one

Excellent job!
Your and your family are in my thoughts and prayers.
Take Care Cindy

Hope lies in the Faith of Hearts. This so reminds me of my childhood,things I seen my mother go through, trying to keep a Family together. Tis not for the weak and in the word remain strong. Peace and Blessings

I really enjoyed reading this powerful poem of faith and hope things are ok for you and your family. well done. 5/5

Aww soo sweet.. and so caring ... your poem is soo descriptive and I love it.. you are a talented writer and I hope you never forget that.. Good job and keep up the good work!! 5/5

Wow, what an emotionally wonderful write. I loved the way you have worded this. The structure was good and as always I enjoyed reading. Just one hint of advice, loose the caps within the poem, I think that ruined the feel of it for me more than anything. But overall this was an outstanding poem.

Peace, Joe