A really beautiful poem...

*isabel*

Aw...simple and cute. I just came back from the beach, and it reminds me a lot of my time there. I liked the poem, not too complicated but not bland. Just perfect.

Sweet and calm. reminds me of the gentle days with one of my exes. it wass really wonderful, those kinds of days, deffinitly the kind you wish could last forever. love that line. use it alot in my own poetry:) thanks fort the comments again, i'm glad you understand my poetry.

I love it

I absolutely loved this.
Amazing write. <3

"The winding path disappears
Leading us to rugged brush
You say "I think we are lost"
And you start to blush

Once again the trail is found
Yet we begin to move aside
Our lips met for moments
With passion not denied

Then you pull me along
And continue to talk
I realize that our stroll
Has become a lover's walk"
^ Best part.

Those three stanzas brought back so many memories.
This poems easily related to.
Probably why it's so great, others can feel the emotion along with yourself.
:D

So beautiful, great imagery in this piece.. so sweet, wonderful write!

"Then you pull me along
And continue to talk
I realize that our stroll
Has become a lover's walk"

Beautiful. Love that stanza the most, keep it up ^^