Another great poem...
lookin forward to reading more of ur stuff xx
~shell~

It is a great poem, but there are some problems with it, I think.

For one, I think if you added some simple punctuation, the flow in some places would be helped alot. Secondly, the last stanza holds two same word rhyming sentences in a row which is too repeditive. Try to switch some of the words around in a scheme like abcb; instead of abcc.

It is a good poem though, nice work.

If there are any questions message me.

~Richi~

Another cute poem but still cliche.. the flow was perfect and you still described your emotions well

Oh I just loved this one!

It was so easy for me to relate with the emotions you described. Amazing job on this one , you have just been added to my favorites!

Well done *5/5*