Comments : When I Say I Am A Christian

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    I'm whispering "I was lost."
    Now I'm found and forgiven.
    ^ I loved those two lines, but you should put a comma after lost, and take the last quotatio mark and put it after forgiven.

    I loved this poem.. Lots, lots, lots. :]
    It's amazing, and it's so true.
    I've never known how to explain what being a christian is like. well, i have.. I just have a hard time writing about it for some odd reason.
    Anywho, you did an oustanding job.
    keep it up.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Shannon

    Compliments to maya angelou.