I'm whispering "I was lost."
Now I'm found and forgiven.
^ I loved those two lines, but you should put a comma after lost, and take the last quotatio mark and put it after forgiven.
I loved this poem.. Lots, lots, lots. :]
It's amazing, and it's so true.
I've never known how to explain what being a christian is like. well, i have.. I just have a hard time writing about it for some odd reason.
Anywho, you did an oustanding job.
keep it up.
5/5