Your on my favorites now. You are a wonderful writer yourself and only a year older than I. I am also a Patriots football and I also play basketball, run track and cross country. Keep writin' girl! The inspiration don't come easy... -elli

That's so cool. Thanks.

Pamela:)

Wow i really liked this poem of yours.. im not sure about the whole "Get away from me and stay,
I am done, but never to be gone away from this place." i think you could have worded it a little better but its still a great poem. keep it up sweetie!!

The rhyme scheme in this was good.
but the form was a little hard on the eyes.
overall, good job though.

and thank you for the comments.