Oh well done. this poem was again awesome. the ammount of love and sadness in it was... eletric! the ending was ok too. those only happen in fairtales and a limited ammount of ppl lives.

again wonderful poem. 5/5 david

Great poem i realy like the ending...a good ending is the key to a good poem in my opinion..please read my poems i would appreciate it alot! i give you a 5!

Don't we all wish! Lol beautiful poem, well written 5/5

Wow amazing poem...don't we all wish that we could have a fairy tale love....but it might take a bunch of wished to get our star

-----tara

WOW 20/10 YOU ARE SO DEEP PG is a lucky girl

Wow. amazing!