This is really good, and all that is true. I really think you did a great job writing it. Honestly I thought it flowed well and was very nice to read.

Pretty long but pretty amazing. Keep up the great work, you're very talented! :)

~jas~

So true. You attacked issues that aren't discussed very often. I loved reading it, and I agree with you 100%.

Very good poem, really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace