Another great song in the making :) I really liked your lyrics....Great job!

A lighting passion is burning inside of me,
Breaking and entering,
My soul,
My body,
Eyes whisper,
What they want to see,
A dream that won't come true,
Until deaths bed I reach,

This stanza really touched something in me. Excellent!
Take Care Love your friend Cindy

Can you hear the laughter?
Calling you back to darkness,
Preying off the moonlight,
Hiding from the sun

you are simply amazing, just loved these, i really wish i could hear you singing your own songs too.. :o)

all the best and take care

I'm curious to know how this song sounds. Words were great.

All I can say is wow! My band is struggeling with lyrics at the moment so if you keep writing like this, I may have to hire you as our song writer!
Very nicly written though. keep it up!