I like this poem. It was easy to read and in ways I can relate to it. The flow was nice and the entire poem itself was well carried out and written.

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"Took possession of her and her existence, leaving nothing behind,
So when you asked her to get over it, there was nothing left to find."

That was heart wrenching couplet! The whole poem had such a sad tone to it, especially the last stanza but that couplet really got to me.
It shows how much love there was there and when it was gone, it took everything with it.
Love is a strange feeling..
5/5
*Gem*

I love this poem. You did a great job.
The flow was really good.
5/5

~Chelsea

I really like this poem too. A very differnt style than I'm used to reading but you made it work. "She only enclosed you in her heart, her mind, her life and soul" this was my favorite line so different and unique it stood out from the rest of them ever time I re-read this poem. The only thing that I would change would be the ending.. it was very unexpected (which is a good thing) but I think that putting the song ling kind of changed the meaning of the poem for me especially "a love that never slips". slips kind of threw me off.

Yup this is what happen to girls so wrong but so true. Boys are stupid lol (most of them before i get backlash lol)

xxx alex xxx

OMG!! i'm not sure if i read it before but its soOoOo gud! all the emotion jus pours out lol luvin dese lines -
She only enclosed you in her heart, her mind, her life and soul,
And that is what you snatched from her; that is all you stole
- lve n miss ya hun! xmwahx

Beautiful poem..different yet soo well written
It was like filled with beauty and emotions..

Excellent write..the words were chosen well..

Kp up the good job!
5/5

xxPoojaxx

Wow havebnt read a poem like this but its good 5/5