Your love really shines in this poem. Great job!

You touched my heart and soul so deep
so that at night i cannot sleep.

This really touched my heart.
Take care Cindy

Wonderful.
I can tell how much you love this person just by reading the poem.

"A life without you is not a life
who else will marry me and take me as his wife?"
^ My favorite lines! 5/5 Keep writing. =]

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Oh the love in this poem. it was excellent in all ways.

5/5 David

A very deep passionate love poem.
Very touching and something I can relate to.
great job, keep it up.

A poem that a lot of people can relate to
A very powerful poem of love
Keep writing
5/5
*Gem*

This is a really good
great work

A beautiful poem by a beautiful person