Comments : Edge of Death (Intro)

  • 17 years ago

    by Br0k3n

    " At one moment you could be happy, with the one you love, living life to the fullest when suddenly life throws you pain after pain and you find yourself sobbing in the darkness, bleeding alone, wondering where it all went wrong. You find yourself living life on the sidelines, watching people live without really being alive yourself. And that's when you realize that your only real friends are the tears; the tears that keep you company on those dark, solemn nights, when you feel like a razor-blade to the wrist is the only way out."

    Like...brilliant. 5/5
    ~Br0k3n

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Wow. I am in awe. that was just amazing. You have a deep and natural talent, don't let it go to waste. I was carried away by the emtion ij this peice, it was very well written. keep up the excellent work. Thanks for the comments

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Lol, i don't "OWN" the style; so of course you can right a poem like it love. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    A brilliant story it left me wanting to read more and more of it. Honestly if you ever get it published id definately buy a copy! ;)
    Lol, the emotion was just amazing in it. You got my attention from the first paragraph of this, honestly write more becuase i really wanna read it. I liked how in the end you find out it was acctually a letter, when reading it i didnt know it was a letter. Only half way into it do we acctually know. Thanks for your comment and keep writing! I love this story! :) xx