I really liked it, it was cute and sad. 5/5

Omg, i love it.
its actually awesome for an eight year old, and as a first poem, its pretty good. :]

For an 8-year-old, it was actually good. Something about it was sweet-sad, yet sweet. True not as great as it can be now but still nice especially when the age is factored in.
~Faith-less

Thats ok. everyone has to start somewhere. its a great poem.