ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

luzaN

I like it.
good job.
I like poems with a kind of repetition
gets the point across
lovely
xx