Somewhere... beyond the sea!

That's what this reminded me of.

Random question, are acrostics always titled with their.. acrosticism? Like.. beyond the stars? Just wondering if that was a general rule.

This was cute. You could kind of tell that you were reallly trying to find ways to make the constraints of the style worked. Some of them, like "being all she can be," worked slightly less well than others. ; ) Unless she's in the army, which would fit with the "stong, bold" love. I was kind of confules with "Embedded/ her smile is yearning for her..." What is embedded where? And did you say her smile is yearning for her?

Oh, man. I just reread what I wrote, and it sounded like I didn't like the poem. That's not true, actually. I thought it was kinda sweet. : ) There were a couple awkward things with it, but I know you have the talent to change those, if you wanted to. Good job!

You know what joe, it wouldnt be a lie if i say you are the best acrostic writer ever, oh god i love the way you penned this poem.
you are very talented dude,
keep it up like always.

I agree with Goran...you sure do an excellent job on the acrostic style Joe! Congrats on placing in the club to club competition! All the best, Debbie

I agree wth all u are great!!!
5/5

God bless u

Well i'm new on this website and i think that the poems that you have written are great and i would really appriciate it if you would vote for my poem i think that it is really good

That was a beautiful acrostic poem. What a romantic image you have created.

You are very good at this style poem,it flows from line to line very smoothly,I like the romantic feeling to it. wonderful.

Thts really gud!!! im jealous ha ha

This is a beautiful poem.
The word choice's were great and flowed well.
Keep it up 5/5

|Sarah|