Aw that was cute i loved its structure and the idea behind it. xx

Gem your love poems always bring a smile to my face :) I love the little messages you always have a the end.
Loved this.
Take Care Love Cindy

Cute at fifteen. What a sweet poem.
I needed a reason to smile. Thanks

No wonder you were always writing exceptionally regardless your age .
Very sweet poem enjoted it lot.

Take care
chavii.

Omg i like this. iike the way you put them in order but started from monday because you know some other people wouldve startded from sunday. anyways i know you dont want to read that. but the poem was great i liked it. 5/5

Yeah well said "bloody hell" because bloody hell is not bad for someone who wrote it when she was 15!! :) love it and it fits so well with the things you go thru at that age :)
99/5

Hahahahahahaha, this one surely cute poem, this is certainly the way people start writing....it seems really cute, just loved the innocence of this theme.. :o)

keep writing

whatever u write looks good

all the best and take care

Thts so shweet