Very nice.. 4/5... good expresive words... good flow... i like it a lot... nicely done
-Marina.

=D thansk you very much for the comment =d

Aw i like this poem cuz its so true... you never know if sumbody would do all that back for you .. its great :)

Had to re-comment.. this is really really good. i like the flow and the emotion 5/5 well done. DON'T STOP WRITEING!
~Marina

Ahah thanks marina ive stopped for a while since i havent found the time but hopefully i will start agains =]