This is sad but i know how you feel gurl....

Hey, hows it going? I really loved this poem, it had depth and emotion which made me really enjoy it! Well penned, keep the great writting up! 5/5

Chan
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Hey, just first of all ... great poem and writting. You need to watch your stanza punctuation but great otherwise... I could really feel the emotion hidden in every lingering word ...

fav stanza: i trusted and held you
i loved and needed you
you thought i had kept it to myself the way you had treated me, but boy i had told the world how you was to me

I like the rythnm! keep up the good work.