I'm speechless..
I think the poems and dedications to John are among your best work..
You always seem to write on a new level when you write a poem about/for him.
That's true love for you. It brings out the best in us..
5/5
*Gem*

Cindy , im finding no words to describe how i felt after reading this poem, its went straight to heart.Each line seen to paint picture of your love.
Hope you doing fine.
take care
chavii.

Such a lovely piece cindy, each stanza flows beautifully into the next and it ends with something special, as do all your poems. Great work Cindy xox

Very touching poem, though we have lost loved ones, they are always looking down on us. Beautifully written, brought tears to my eyes, i loved every bit of it.. Wonderful job.

You sure didn't pull yourself short on this one. So sad, hopeful and beautiful... One of your bests.

"Like the gulls soaring gracefully
Up in the wondrous sky
Soon I will spread my wings
And into your arms I'll fly"

Very heartwrenching... brought tears to my eyes. To love that strongly, is such a gift from God.

Always,
Jeannie

Owwwww this was so emotional i felt lyk crying at the end
it was a beautiful write each line was like an old memory clear in my mind i luved it so very much

I almost copied the complete poem and was abt to pase it here...but then realized that it doesnt make sense.. :o) This is an superb piece and i could feel your heart while writing it. You know how amazing you are...so i dont hv to tell u anymore.
keep writing sweety, loved each and everything abt this one

all the best and take care

It is IT!
heartfelt and moving, a true masterpiece of the heart...

Wow.. very nice. and the nice feeling of love. well done. hope you are fine. take care 5/5

Great poem as always and appreciate the comment. 5/5

Aw that was such a good poem it was very heartfelt great use of words.. great job!! xx

Ah again another great and heart felt poem. you can really describe love.

well done and i am always here for you. 5/5 David

Very beautiful poem........
possible the best you have written...

5...... Barry

This poem is amazing so full of love and hope :) it is always the heart that refuses to belive that its over :) love this poem it deserves nothing short of 99/5 :))

Beautiful Cindy......love these lines:

We weathered all life's storms
Like the lite-house on the hill
Surviving natures furies
Till death left an icy chill

Another great write...5/5 Debbie

First off, amazing job.
It was heartbreaking to read, though amazing. It was a wonderful dedication to your husband. Just from your poems, I can tell you miss him terribly.

"Your love moved my heart
Like the ocean moves the sand
Crashing like waves on the beach
You were there to take my hand"

^ By far, my favorite stanza! Just wow. The imagery in this poem was flat-out perfect. Spectacular job, keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

"Surviving natures furies
Till death left an icy chill" -- and so do those lines gave me the chills...

This was, yet again, a beautiful piece. I was rendered speechless, yet captivated by the descriptions that you've penned, vividly, in this poem. My real pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing.
Hope you all the best in life and take care.
Love,
Debbie

A beautiful piece allowing your true love to shine through. Breathtaking.
Excellent.

Cindy
I know he is waiting to take your hand once more. You will be reunited with your true love once again. Somewhere over that rainbow that always makes you smile.

Like the gulls soaring gracefully
Up in the wondrous sky
Soon I will spread my wings
And into your arms I'll fly

I really liked your ending all the best.5/5

This one is so beautiful. I know what you feel. It brought tears to my eyes.