Comments : River blue

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a lovely poem.

    River of my broken blue
    Hear my voice call out for you
    The rainbow of my better day
    Tainted eyes have gone astray

    This stanza is really great.
    Take care love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    River of my broken blue
    Is there a heart bright and true
    One more step, deeper I fall
    The final breath, you lost it all
    ^^^
    I love this ending stanza especially the last line!
    ~ breathtaking

    Take care
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    I liked this one also