Very sad, but wonderfully written...

*isabel*

Hey,
i really enjoyed reading this poem. I loved the rhymeing, it didnt seem forced or cliche and really helped the flow and rhythem of the poem. So youve mastered the rhyming technique excellently in this poem! :) Anywyas i really liked the vocabulary youve used, it has great discription and kept me wanting tyo read more. I really loved the flow, it was flawless. One thing that threw me off was your punctuation... i htought you should of used mroe of it. But other then that its a good read! Keep it up! xx

Hm. Interesting.
It was badly written, but the flow wasn't perfect.

I loved the "moral" of this story, or maybe I should say "point." Very sweet and simple.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

I thought it was wonderfully written and the flow was great too!!!! My mom use to sing Amazing Grace to me when I was young...and she still cared about me... I never knew what it meant..back then...but it always made me smile.