Great job on this piece.

I am patient and true to you
Being deeply in love with you
Theres nothing I would rather do
Then loving and sharing with you

This stanza really shows your love.
Take Care Cindy

I really liked this poem, and I thought the rhymes to be very creative. It's really hard to ryhme the same sounding words in one verse, but you did it well! The flow and rythym in this poem were great!! A very sweet poem as well.