This is emotional and good; however, I know from reading your other poems that you can do better. Tweak with it a little and omit some of the eceryday and overused words .... such as "but"

Just my thought

--Sher

Oh again another well thought out poem. wat i loved the most was the title.

it was inviting and brought a smile to my face. yet the poem was sad. i still loved it fully.

5/5 David