Good poem. The flow was exellent and the emotion was deep.

'Dreams fall fast
Harder each time
Emotions long past
Rejuvenating with each rhyme,'

My favourite stanza.
Keep it up 5/5

:Sarah:

Wow great poem with amazing emotion, i love it

~brittany (MD)

I'm not a fan of poetry relating to love but i agree with sarah in that that was your best stanza. I actually reread it several times. Even though I dislike the topic you still managed to leave an impression.

This is an excellent poem. The flow was great and the rhyming was really natural. I love the description in it, it creates great imagery. Well done. 5/5

Tammie