Wow love this poem, its excellent, youve done a great job on your first effort :) keep it up 5/5

Wow. . .you've come a long way. . .wonderful poem, I'm glad you don't have to wait anymore.
auna

I love it, well done. So much emotion nothing wrong with the flow it worked well. keep it up 5/5

I really liked it...i think that it is so ture...ttyl
-payge

I like this poem, it's very good.

I liked the rhyming very simple but that's the beauty of it....
very lovely poem =)

For your first effort it was a wonderful attempt...you really did a good job keep up the work 5/5