Perfectly expressed! 5/5

"Tears, they sing"

It may only be 3 words in a line for some. But to me these words hide a strong message behind them. There are so many unanswered cries, we ignore them. "When people wake up to the reality of this world that is when we will start to see change"-ME

I dont believe that this will ever happen
Your right. War will never end

Take Care,
Bonnie
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This is very good 5/5.

I liked this poem. It seemed to flow well for the most part, although a few lines appeared to be a little out of rhythm.

The meaning was both strong and well delivered. I have a passion for peace, and this poem put that feeling across incredibly well. Excellently written.

Sole. x