Crap poem but got my emotions under control...sorta

Thinking humorlessly
which car will make my dream come true??
i step into the air
carelessly

a brief spurt of pain
My life is over
NEVER to start again
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I love these two stanzas there so deep,, The last one caught my eye the most because of the way you...well...I don't know why Its just deep and it can cut like a knife!! xx
Love you Hope too see some more just tell me if you need me to comment any poems!!
xx Love Roxy/Emily

I love this poem, it's really deep, i have no idea why but it feels like i can relate to it- keep it up!!
C xXx