You make me love you..
Well actually you don't 'make' me, i can't help it =)
I'm glad this is quite an old one Gem and not about me!!
Love you
Marcus

I feel so trapped in this game
Of love I always lose
Cos no matter what I do
I always end up bruised

i love this stanza ,great write , feel addicted to your poems now :P

Gem
Great job on this poem. The sadness comes through.

I wish we could be happy
Find a way to make it right
I'm so tired of broken hearts
And crying tears at night

This stanza really stood out.
Take Care Love Cindy

Hey darl a very touching poem. very well written xx

Awww this is cute .. i like this is got one with the sae title but they are different i just need to post it up great poem 5/5

This poem is one of my favorites that i have read of yours! it definetly gets 5/5 from me.

Awe it hooked me in around the second stanza and then the end wrapped it up perfectly. I really liked this poem, it really stood out to me, no idea why but it did. I like your writing. =)