Nice poem, but i don't think the flow was good enough though, but good work an thanks for commenting on my poem.

I understand what your going through ,this one brought a tear to my eye cos in some ways what your feeling mirrors what i feel.

Very good i can relate to that thxs for the nice comment :)

"endless pit of depression" oh it does happen. very good poem, although this isn't really something negative I just have to point it out. its "dying" not "dieing" (sorry it just made me cringe because I'm a spelling freak). Anyways excellent job, I enjoyed this a lot! 5/5

I can defenantly relate and are you my twin