Lol this was a great poem, never read a poem about eyes. The flow was great, loved it. 5/5

Dear Amnah aslamalaikom
I realy liked your poetry , i wish you more tallents and driving penn on beside your long life, would you like to give me permision to put your poems in one another website as will?
i hope you give me permision, here is my email you can write it to me
gurbatt@yahoo.com
have good time and write more

Well... so much about eyes!! Nice to read. Good flow and sweet! Well done!

Its all about the eyes huh??
your poem is awesome!!
5/5