Aww, I loved this poem but it is so sad. I almost cried. I rate this a 5 all around. Keep writing and I'm sorry you feel like this. I sometimes do too.

Ah, that's just so sad...
it's terrible....
i deffinately give you a 5/5 though.

and to answer your PM i live in Meridian, MS.

The flow is kinda struggling but the whole poem itself is great so much emotion was put in this poems great job

laura

The flow is kinda struggling but the whole poem itself is great so much emotion was put in this poems great job

laura