Well written

I hope u dont feel this way always I think we all feel this way some times

Alone
it's how we're born
it's how we live
it's how we die

ahhhhh that is soo amazing.. its my favorite part. it drew me in right away!! soo well thought out!!
good job
5/5 :)

<3 ang

The first part drew me in and i did enjoy it, although it was too cliche for my liking, you had good flow and was very well worded.
Tara-Kay
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