I love the idea of the prelude and the epilogue. It really makes the poem unique, and a whole lot better. The rhyming is natural and the flow is great too. It shows your emotion as well. A flawless poem David. Well done. 5/5

Tammie

This is a wonderful poem David. The ryhming was great and the flow was perfect. Well done on another great poem. 5/5

Kalee

Wonderful poem...

*isabel*

David
Filled with passion and love. Good job!

My love for you is endless
With your beauty and grace

These lines are beautiful.
Take care Cindy :)

I loved this poem. Great job.

Like the way you did the prelude and epilogue....nicely done without being too explicit....

That was hot and quite amazing.
Great poem.

David this poems is excellent. I could feel everything you had written and I must say that you shined!

I really like the different formats. And to be honest I myself and left longing to feel safe and secure also. Well done babe.

--Sher

:) i liked it very much and while reading this some memories did come running back, on that i wont coment lol but i loved the poem :))

Awsum. very sweet. ;)

I feel so alive
When I'm up close to your face
My love for you is endless
With your beauty and grace
what a great work.. very passionate. love... and real love. enjoy take care

It all goes great together... 5/5